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Spirits Rise |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas 
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
James, I do believe you are going to show your true talents in Senryu..... |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
I really like this - especially the first line.  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JWesley~ ABSOLUTELY PERFECT ! It's so nice to see you explore the beauty of this form. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Thanks so very much to all for your help and kind words on these several three-lined whatchamagits I've posted last couple of days. I have much to learn, but must admit, as I was warned, they are addicting (another world has been opened to me)and now I have all these 17 syllable, 3-line gotcha's running around in my head and was up to almost three this morning typeing some of them down and blurry-eyed checking the dictionary for syllable count...WOW some of the ways we pronounce things is a real eye opener! Walk Easy, my friends, while I just sleepwalk the day away... jwesley [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 08-13-2001).] |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Jwesley, You have said so much here, in so little words. Beautiful... Elise |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, I like this one a lot. Sandra |
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