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Open Poetry #15

To Kiss The Sea

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-08-13 02:13 AM

To Kiss The Sea

I saw the sun kiss the sea
and it was done so tenderly

he reached right down to touch moist lips
the tide had practiced all her scripts

every day at this time a special event
stolen moments in each others arms are spent

then he retreats in his after glow
but tomorrow will bring him back she knows

so his kisses are passionate in the twilight
when morning again warms her in his skylight

picture provided by Bernie Slicker

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-08-13 03:54 AM

Once again, marvelous work. MORE of these, please!

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

2 posted 2001-08-13 05:40 AM

Absolutely wonderful personification to create vivid imagery. A lovely way of showing heavenly interaction of nature that eludes to sensual personification. Well done.

1slippery_lady
Junior Member

since 2001-07-20

Posts 20
Ohio, USA

3 posted 2001-08-14 11:05 PM

KEWLLLLLL Slickster, keep 'em coming

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

4 posted 2001-08-15 12:44 PM

Beautiful!

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

5 posted 2001-08-15 01:01 AM

awesome and metaphorical poem! Glad you found the photo and were inspired!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2001-08-15 05:55 AM

No wonder that lovers love the sunset...James

shadow of the fall
Member

since 2001-08-13

Posts 83
Indiana

7 posted 2001-08-15 06:22 AM

someone is a good photographer, this is lovely.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

8 posted 2001-08-15 04:14 PM

This proves what I have been saying, the sun is SUPPOSED to set over the ocean. This northeast coast is all screwed up. LOL
Like this lots.
Sandra

I took a walk around the world to ease my troubled mind. I left my body lying somewhere in the sands of time (3 Doors Down)

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