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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 2001-08-13 01:21 AM



HOT

Heat waves "Hi. Hello."
On the ground the eggs will fry
Taste the bits of grass

~~~

101

Inside I smile big
Outside a painting is born
It’s sunburn canvas

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 08-13-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-08-13 01:49 AM


Walt~

This Hot Is So COOL !

~*Marge*~

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tracie66
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2 posted 2001-08-13 05:54 AM


You rock Walt  
Tracie

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Decaflame
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3 posted 2001-08-13 10:02 AM



it is in his style
it greets me with miles of smiles
his Wows wave so warm

VAS
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4 posted 2001-08-13 10:12 AM


heh heh heh
enjoyed both
especially the sunburn on the canvas
feeling red?

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5 posted 2001-08-13 11:07 AM


Very good.I'm glad you tried haiku.

paladin

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6 posted 2001-08-13 07:16 PM


only the genius of walt could combine acrostic with haiku. . .

and do it so well!!!!  great job walty!!!

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Dark Angel
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7 posted 2001-08-14 01:17 AM


Oh Walty m'friend these are so very good and clever. Especially loved the "101"

Well done!

Maree  

vlraynes
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8 posted 2001-08-14 01:19 AM



Walt-
   You are AWESOME!
   Love it!

   Hugs,
   ~vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



CocoBaci
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9 posted 2001-08-14 03:14 AM


Really coooool haikus Walt and ya know what else me likez  

Hugs2YuhPoetFriend
*~coco~*

Paula Finn
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10 posted 2001-08-15 12:17 PM


That Texas sun has definetly fried what brain you have LOL....you know I am only kidding...these are fantastic
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11 posted 2001-08-22 06:21 AM


yo...very cute haiku!
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12 posted 2001-08-22 08:56 PM


You are great! I loved both! I think you need to open a WayoutWalt World so we could see for ourselves where you come up with this stuff.   LOL

Sincerely,
Regina

wayoutwalt
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13 posted 2001-08-22 09:57 PM


you guys and gals have been so nice..sorry i havent been around lately yuh this month is busy for me
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