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Suetang
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0 posted 2001-08-12 10:38 PM


My fever is high and my body is hot
as my skin breaks out in a sweat
I suffer from shortness of breath
sometimes experiencing a very
erratic heartbeat

I tremble all over and feel dizzy
sometimes becoming very weak at the knees
There is no cure for my condition
diagnosed as "love"
All of these symptomes occur
whenever I'm with you

Falling in love with you is like
having a contagious illness
Being in love with you gives me
the most wonderful feelings
as I embrace my illness
neve wanting the fever to subside

Waves of desire wash over me
and as you leave I am left wondering
as to when the symptoms of this
extraordinary love will return

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-08-12 10:55 PM


SueTang~
Yep ! You got it alright, girlie~

Take two *kisses* and call him in the morning~

Delightful !
~*Marge*~

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Indiana
2 posted 2001-08-13 04:45 PM


yes, I would say you have a bad case of it  
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3 posted 2001-08-13 04:54 PM


sounds like it.... I would say bed rest is the best thing for you now.... ( evil grin)

                          


rwood
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4 posted 2001-08-14 05:53 AM


And drink plenty of fluids such as DOM Pe`rignon and he needs to feed you strawberries dipped in chocolate! No hard labor for a least 3 days outside the love nest.   Love is in the air!
Sincerely,
Regina

WRBreezin
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5 posted 2001-08-14 06:07 AM



Passion, Passion, Passion...as the night is long!

Willie

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2001-08-14 07:09 AM


Yes the beauty of love is in the way the other one responds to your kiss or your touch...James
Suetang
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7 posted 2001-08-14 10:44 PM


Thank you all for your wonderful comments, especially yours Regina.  I plan to show your comment to him and hopefully he'll take notice! Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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