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Open Poetry #15

Such Dreams (Senryu?)

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

0 posted 2001-08-12 09:29 PM

I assume, after reading Nan's definition on Senryu way back in the workshop...this is a senryu???

Castaway mine heart
foolishly loving her thus -
such dreams make men cry.

jwesley
(c) August 2001

Snooganzmeister32
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since 2001-07-17

Posts 67
Cali, USA

1 posted 2001-08-12 11:38 PM

*applauds* I loved this one!

MoonShadow
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since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

2 posted 2001-08-13 05:32 AM

Looks like you got a winner there to me. Congrats!

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

3 posted 2001-08-13 08:03 AM

jwesley,

Yay! This is a senryu if I ever saw one

Well done.

TaraB

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2001-08-13 08:55 AM

Yes James, a Senryu it certainly is....well done, Sir!

illusion
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since 2001-06-19

Posts 296

5 posted 2001-08-13 10:07 AM

I enjoyed this very much - well written!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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6 posted 2001-08-13 02:33 PM

JWesley~

Very, very nice
Take the words and make them work
Writing Senryu~

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

7 posted 2001-08-13 02:54 PM

I think a section of fog has opened up and shown me a new path...this is fun!

Thanks to you all...

jwesley

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2001-08-14 10:51 AM

enjoy

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