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rosepetals25
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0 posted 2001-08-12 05:56 PM





There You Are

Life’s raging erratic nature consumes me,
Stress pounding down without relief
My mind screaming for a way an escape
As a wandering hand reaches out…searching..
Hoping for a brief moment of peace

And then……      there you are.

I hear your soft whisper filled with love
And the nightmare vanishes into misty memories
As my soul breaks from it’s heavy burden
Free to fly on this current of never ending love
That you so openly and graciously offer.

TaraB

© Copyright 2001 Tara Baldridge - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2001-08-12 08:13 PM


This is so lovely, Tara! Very beautifully expressed!
jwesley
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2 posted 2001-08-12 10:06 PM


it's wonderful to be so blessed my friend, not only with the love you have, but with the words to share it....


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3 posted 2001-08-12 10:37 PM


Denise - Thank you for the compliment. I'm glad you enjoyed it

jwesley - I have been very blessed.. I just prays it lasts. Thank you for stopping in

TaraB

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4 posted 2001-08-12 11:29 PM


I like the way you presented this...
very cool...  
and a sincere write of hope and loves promise.
nice to see you smiling in your poetry again RP.

I know no one is to blame
In time youll feel strength when you call my name
I know Ill never hold you again
And I know Ill never be the same
VH

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5 posted 2001-08-13 07:25 PM


as it should be. . .

when it's right. . .  

wonderful rp. ..

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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6 posted 2001-08-13 08:19 PM


Janet -  Thank you for your nice words and for stopping in.  I'm happy you liked it.

Sven - It sure feels right.. one can only hope Thanks for reading

TaraB

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7 posted 2001-08-14 10:48 AM


enjoy
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