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Open Poetry #15

Connecting the Dots

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-08-12 05:52 PM

Connecting the Dots

there is a dot
inside my heart
and there is one
inside my head
one is felt
the other knows right
with no compromise
one always wins out instead
I wish that
I could find a way
to connect these dots
without this line
pulled together
it leaves me
tied in knots

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2001-08-12 05:58 PM

Tied in knots, how true it is. Cool poem. lady.
Sandra

g-hm
Member

since 2001-05-16

Posts 85

2 posted 2001-08-12 06:26 PM

Why connect the dots,
When you have to spend more time untying the knots?

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2001-08-23 05:11 AM

1slick_lady-
   Very cool way of looking at this.
   Enjoyed.

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

4 posted 2001-08-23 05:57 AM

Sever the line,
Let it flap in the breezes
Disconnect and delight,
In letting each have it’s own way,
The strongest ruling out,
That which most effects the heart will sweep you away,
That which most effects the head will point the direction.
Thus, you have two lines
Heading out,
Weaving the pathway of the tapestry of life.

Gloom

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-08-23 12:09 PM

OneSlickLady~
Oh ... I like the premise of this~
Nice~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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