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Passions Voice
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since 2000-10-23
Posts 291
Michigan

0 posted 2001-08-12 03:25 PM


Where is the rain?

The rain that fell on me that day
When you first walked into my life.
As I ran across that parking lot,
Thinking that I wouldn't get wet.

You offered to share your umbrella
And a cup of coffee to warm me up.
Little did I know, that you would
Warm me even more than it did.

Where is the rain?

The rain that fell on me that day
When you last walked out of my life.
As I ran down the driveway after you
Not caring if I got soaking wet.

You told me that it was over, you were done
And gave me back that umbrella of comfort.
Little did I know that the handle was
Colder than the wind that blew that day.

Where is the rain?

The rain that I'm waiting to fall on me now
The rain that will bring you back to my heart
The rain that I'll dance in with you, my love,
When summer's heat gives way to your comfort.

I see the clouds.

passion is life. . . ~Diana


© Copyright 2001 Diana Athena - All Rights Reserved
jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
1 posted 2001-08-12 03:28 PM


Very well written my friend...like the way you brought it about. The rain washes and cleanses...washes away the old...brings in the new...life continues and flowers grow...

nice write...

jwesley

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

2 posted 2001-08-12 03:32 PM


It's odd that just as I saw this title it began to rain here.  May the rain flood through your heart and leave it's gentle peace behind.  Hugs.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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