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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2001-08-12 10:58 AM


DIGGING UP DIRT
Virginia Salter

digging up dirt
takin’ out grass
and weeds that grow
tillin’ it well
makin’ weed free
my rich and sandy soil

diggin’ it deep
siftin’ it through
removin’ undesirables
so it’ll be true

sinkin’ my hands into
the cool earth
to search and destroy
before unwanted gives birth

purgin’ all that’s less than the dream that I hold
yet then I realize that nothin’ would grow
for an increment of time
the length I do not know

I have learned
it just can’t be pure dream,
I’ve gotta take
the curd with the cream

yet be diligent, alert,  
and yes a bit wary
watchin’ for what could come
and overtake the beauty

not acquiesce
nor be apathetic,
so what’s allowed in my realm
is truly copacetic

but plants is plants
and soil is soil

© August 25.  2000


© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2001-08-12 11:18 AM


LOve the illustrative lesson in this poem!   The ending brings it right back to reality and makes the whole poem very clever!!   Great stuff!
Janette
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since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now
2 posted 2001-08-12 01:51 PM


A delightful read...now I had better go and weed my flower beds!
Zinsser
Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641
Calif.
3 posted 2001-08-12 02:24 PM


I love it!!!
Words of wisdom....

           Thank You
         ~~~Connie~~~

Mother_Earth
Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan
4 posted 2001-08-12 05:01 PM


VAS, love your words, but no way will it get me out and doing that weeding thing.  Great fun with words.  ME
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