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ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 1999-09-23
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0 posted 2001-08-12 03:58 AM


Some of the things I miss way too much
a soft little kiss and softer touch
knowing that someone is there with me
to hug and hold when thats all I need

Someone to cuddle and sqeeze me tight
someone to tell me that its alright
someone to laugh with when all is good
someone to make me feel all I should

Someone to hold in the still of night
someone to cure my hearts lonely flight
someone to walk with just holding hands
someone to let me be all I can

Someone to show me why I'm alive
someone to fill the deep void inside
someone to give me a gentle shove
and just let me feel a little Love.




Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.


[This message has been edited by ThUnDeRkYsS (edited 08-12-2001).]

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Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
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1 posted 2001-08-12 08:09 AM


My guess is that something will not be missing long, sweetie.  You have way too many good qualities for that to happen!  Hope this helps...{{{{{HUGZ}}}}}  

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by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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2 posted 2001-08-12 10:04 AM


yeah...I don't think you will be missing that for very long..... You make the ladies * SIGH *  
1slick_lady
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3 posted 2001-08-12 02:50 PM


aching heart...i hope you find this and more soon...helen
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4 posted 2001-08-12 02:58 PM


Thunderkyks,

        I really like this poem. The emotions are so easily felt.. wonderful write.. muchly enjoyed

TaraB

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