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Trina
Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 97

0 posted 2001-08-11 08:26 PM

you may game me,
try to tame me,
but honey
you can't name me,
so you I do not fear

never made me
or displayed me,
to others
you obeyed me
but lies are all I hear

you provoked me
as you stroked me
beat me
and then choked me
so I had to leave

always dared me
never scared me
but I thank you
for you prepared me
for the pain I'd never
again receive

Ariana
Senior Member

since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

1 posted 2001-08-11 08:30 PM

Trina: Ouch - this one sounds like you are really hurting. Maybe you got out of this just in time. Big hugs!!

Trina
Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 97

2 posted 2001-08-11 08:34 PM

Thanx Ariana, don't worry it's nothing serious since I made the whole situation up for this poem. Glad you took time to read it .

Take care,

Trina

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-08-11 08:44 PM

Wow, now this is powerful writing. It all seems so real. Nice work.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Trina
Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 97

4 posted 2001-08-11 08:47 PM

Thanx, Lonewolf I'm glad you liked it. I glad it seems real even though it's not.

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

5 posted 2001-08-11 09:08 PM

Very strong. Perhaps it may inspire someone who recognizes herself there, to live it to the ending and thereby becoming free. Thank you for sharing.

Trina
Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 97

6 posted 2001-08-11 09:10 PM

Well I sure wouldn't mind if it had that type of effect on someone , thanx for reading

Take care,

Trina

oh2beme
Member

since 2000-07-24

Posts 215
NV USA

7 posted 2001-08-12 04:43 AM

I must say, this did drudge up some bad memories. However, I felt the emotion it contained and you did a fabulous job for making the whole situation up...very well done, I truly enjoyed this.

Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

8 posted 2001-08-12 05:12 PM

Trina, so glad this is your make believe and so sorry it is others true to life. Thank you for sharing with us. ME

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

9 posted 2001-08-12 06:17 PM

Trina, this is really a powerful verse.
Very good, enjoyed it much.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

Trina
Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 97

10 posted 2001-08-13 09:40 PM

Thanx all of you for reading and I hope it doesn't bring back too many bad memories for anyone. I'm glad everyone liked my poem , I guess everyone is getting used to me making up things by now. I know I do seem to write about serious subjects alot and it does make me think alot about those who can relate to them while I'm sitting here making up half the things I write. Well take care everyone

Trina

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