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redheart angrybraids
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0 posted 2001-08-11 07:34 PM



i have gorged five minutes to its fullest, whipping thumb prints to cotton, going threw and threw the hall,
caught in the dull glare of 30 years, stunned at the bare, blaming of the blue,
holding the fort down in obtrusive altering, not dareing the china, not asking for white,
motioning for ever clear, and fresh rooms,
adorned with moments, forgetting the copper pipes.

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids


© Copyright 2001 Amelia A. Ensign - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-08-11 10:30 PM


RedHeartAngryBraids~
So wonderful to see your gentle thoughts upon the pages~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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redheart angrybraids
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2 posted 2001-08-12 03:58 AM


thank you
i will read you soon.
i have been so busy
i am looking forward to your marvelous words, ringing chime on porch of talk,
so sweet and aromaic,
thank you for reading such a dull
title, i know,
rather elusive to the facts, yeah?
kindly, amelia

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids


Rindercella
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3 posted 2001-08-13 05:30 PM


Oh, I like your name and this poetry.
Very different and quite unique are your thoughts.

*If the shoe fits ... the castle is yours*



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4 posted 2001-08-13 05:34 PM


some unique imagery here..an enjoyable read...


Martie
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5 posted 2001-08-13 05:59 PM


I enjoyed reading this creative poem, very much!
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6 posted 2001-08-13 07:00 PM


again, I have always loved your view of the world. . .  

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7 posted 2001-08-13 07:04 PM


I love your way with words! Thanks for sharing your magical pen.  

Maree

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