Maid Marion Takes Her Turn

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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-08-11 05:40 PM

Determined not to stay behind
the Maid departs tradition
she steals a weapon, tiptoes out
and follows her true passion.

No fearful lady is the Maid
she searched for her Robin
through Sherwood forest she does steal
until she fights beside him.

Once they have beaten back the men
who wish to hold down progress
Sir Robin takes his lady fair
and gathers her in solace.

For she has thoughts she has not shared
her worry for his future
He is at risk at every turn
And yet he never falters.

So tenderly does he assure
her passion is not leaving
For much as she would cleave to him
He also holds the feeling.

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

1 posted 2001-08-11 05:58 PM

Every Robin deserves a Marion.

-MVS

"It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself."
-MVS

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-08-11 05:59 PM

Nice flow here, Sandra. Good story!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

athena4
Senior Member

since 2000-12-10

Posts 622

3 posted 2001-08-11 06:03 PM

Sandra,
Robin is out there somewhere. We have just been looking in all the wrong forests... Great write.
Love, Elise

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2001-08-11 06:09 PM

"He also holds the feeling"...did you have a sword fight with him? James

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-08-11 06:22 PM

truly someone that any Robin would love to have next to him. . .

great job Sandra. . .

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rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

6 posted 2001-08-11 07:47 PM

She knew exactly what she wanted! Delightful read. Very well written!
Sincerely,
Regina

Passions Voice
Member

since 2000-10-23

Posts 291
Michigan

7 posted 2001-08-12 03:03 PM

This is very well done. Just goes to show you that for every Robin, there's a Marion right behind him.

Great job.

passion is life. . . ~Diana

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

8 posted 2001-08-12 11:11 PM

and I dearly love a story with a happy ending!!!! Especially this one!!!

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end...

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