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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-08-11 05:14 PM


Touching


As she
took my hand
I could feel her
touching my heart.

Will she be
the woman I love?
I don't know
but she has
a good start.


Jameslee@August11,2001



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Titia Geertman
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1 posted 2001-08-11 05:51 PM


Hold on to her till you know JamesMichael.
Really loved this little gentle verse.

Titia

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Lone Wolf
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2 posted 2001-08-11 05:56 PM


Lovely write, James.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Ariana
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3 posted 2001-08-11 08:22 PM


James - you are such a romantic.  You will know when she does have your heart!!  Enjoyed.
Tiersdin
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4 posted 2001-08-11 08:38 PM


Very sweet, James, I wish you luck...

*smiles*
~Tier

Midnitesun
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5 posted 2001-08-11 09:18 PM


So simple, so powerful, so lovely.
walker
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6 posted 2001-08-11 10:05 PM


Very beautiful words, promising love?
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7 posted 2001-08-11 10:54 PM


JamesMichael~
You say this so gently ...
A special touch says so much~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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MoonShadow
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8 posted 2001-08-11 11:52 PM


Simple says a lot. A simple touch can reach so deep.
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9 posted 2001-08-12 01:18 AM


Be careful she could be a martian!  I saw that on t.v. once - it is in their hands    just kidding!  Loved it, and bet she loves ya too!

To see real beauty ~ try closing your eyes!   ~* Mysteria *~

maeve
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10 posted 2001-08-12 06:08 AM


James, you write such beauty from the heart. I hope she turns out to be the one.  

Maeve

Take me home to Erin's shores,
to where my heart roams free.

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