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NoteBook Pages
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0 posted 08-11-2001 12:04 PM       View Profile for NoteBook Pages   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for NoteBook Pages

Each day that
dawns inside my
world is a storm
deep with in
my torn heart
I walk alone
in silence, under
a  rainless sky
seeking strength
and comfort from
my own fear

In the pool of
blue tears I
see the night
and feel our
distance trailing
among my soul,
I have savored
the want, the touch,
the taste of your
body the way you
feel each time you
call my name,
each time we
speak as lovers,
only to be haunted
by your voice as
the door closes and the
nights of being lonely
begin again
love is a four
letter word
and time is
just a number
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Janet Marie
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1 posted 08-11-2001 12:32 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

this is achingly beautiful,
such a haunting emotive piece...
excellent title, and the endings impact is perfect poetry
very well done

I know no one is to blame
In time youll feel strength when you call my name
I know Ill never hold you again
And I know Ill never be the same
VH

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2 posted 08-11-2001 06:40 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

the longing here is so intense. . . the words just make you feel the heartache. . . I see that you must know or have known these feelings. . .

excellent writing. . . hopefully, your longing will come to an end. . .

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RSWells
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3 posted 08-11-2001 07:03 PM       View Profile for RSWells   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSWells

There is no comfort in fear or good in good bye. Perhaps you need some rain.

"Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve"

Zinsser
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4 posted 08-11-2001 07:34 PM       View Profile for Zinsser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Zinsser

Once again... you've done a beautiful job
Passions Voice
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5 posted 08-12-2001 03:02 PM       View Profile for Passions Voice   Email Passions Voice   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Passions Voice

I think that the rain is coming.  

Get the umbrellas ready.  Well done.

passion is life. . . ~Diana

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6 posted 08-14-2001 08:31 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

love is a four
letter word
and time is
just a number"


indeed it is,  you expressed this pure with much emotion.....nicely done, and welcome here.....


Greeneyes~
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7 posted 08-14-2001 09:45 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

enjoy
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8 posted 08-14-2001 09:47 PM       View Profile for rosepetals25   Email rosepetals25   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rosepetals25

NBP,

     Such heartache so visable here. I hope this is from a place in the past and you are now in a happier spot. The raw emotion felt here is sooo wonderfully expressed.. excellent write.

TaraB

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9 posted 09-24-2001 07:10 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

I missed this somehow, and I can't remember where I noticed your name today. This is wonderful work.

Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence.

Enchantress
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10 posted 09-24-2001 07:47 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Very very well done.  Enjoyed!
passing shadows
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11 posted 06-01-2004 03:59 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

wow! awesome!
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