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Two Sets of Light
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Two Sets of Light |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Two Sets of Light World changes From day to night Drawing out it's own Forms of life Two orbs Two sets of light I love the days But Oh how I Cherish the nights Crisp cool lights To set the mood Casting perfect shadows For what lovers do Reflections on The waters to gaze Drawing out thoughts Clearing the haze Every breath Seems to refresh Yes I love the days But Oh how I Cherish the nights Thank You |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
...assuming one's not too tired to cherish them... The night is a very interesting world of its own. -MVS "It's all in the details -- the Big Picture always takes care of itself." |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
oh i like this...i cherish the nights because its a time when i can dream...this is a lovely poem. ~Dawn |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Zinsser~ Very easy to get caught up in the magic of this one~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Mark: Yes, the key is to stay awake .... : ) Poutprincess: Thank You! Marge: Thank You too I was hoping the magic was there.... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Cherish is a word that has long had meaning to me, both in song, and content...this is a delightful read...thank you! |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
The Sun when done draws soon the Moon, both are fun, midnight and noon. Enjoyed "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Sunshine: Thank You! I love the word also... RSWells: I love it! Thanks Thank You |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Z...night is my favorite time too...helen |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Helen, it is a different light |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
me too! me too! |
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