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WRBreezin
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0 posted 2001-08-11 08:40 AM




Tying

Tying her boot lace seals my content
the snug fit bracing her stride
In her spry steps my breath is surrounded
with the certainty she'll return at the next moon
to butter my affection
and scent my pillows with her hair

Willie
©2001

[This message has been edited by WRBreezin (edited 08-11-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Robert Joseph - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 2001-08-11 08:43 AM


...and when she does, she'll have many a tale to tell - Good philosphy, Willie..
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2 posted 2001-08-11 09:43 AM


WRBreezin~
This is lovely~
~*Marge*~

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Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2001-08-11 09:48 AM


WRBreezin,
Sounds good to me. Enjoyed

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4 posted 2001-08-11 12:09 PM


Soft and sweet, with a dash of confidence. Nice.
Sandra

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5 posted 2001-08-12 06:48 AM


Willie
This was beautiful, I really enjoyed this. Welcome to Passions and I'll look forward to reading some more of your work.  
Take care......Sue

Suetang

WRBreezin
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6 posted 2001-08-13 10:49 AM



Thanks to one, and all! I'm glad this caught your eyes.

Willie

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