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A Woman of Ambition
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A Woman of Ambition |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A Woman of Ambition Oh yes... she was everything I wanted and had all the things I need. It seemed as if I'd died and heaven had come to me. And yes... for awhile we shared the same dream named forever. We imagined a happy future of two lovers spending an eternity together. Of course... it all seemed so real ...until...one day..... she calmly took my dream away as she spoke of her ambition to be free of me. Jameslee@August11,2001 |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This one is a heart-breaker... |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Ouch! But was it a Wise decision? Sometimes our Ambition bites us in the rear. So sorry that happened. Sincerely, Regina |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"And yes... for awhile we shared the same dream named forever." Ah James ... what a precious writing from the heart. Ambitions indeed, come in various forms, and sometimes in directions that blind side us out of the blue. This is a beautiful write, much enjoyed.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
James Ambition got in your way, but maybe you would have grown apart as the time passed. Big hugs to you and your broken heart. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
SBJ... that last verse... with its poetic intend, turn of phrase and impact is worth its weight in gold... (or those chocolate kisses you love so)  well done poet James. jm I know no one is to blame |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Heartbreaking, but great poem. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh James, this is sooooooo sad, I hope now you have found a woman who has an ambition to love your forever! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, our hearts go out to you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Sunshine, Regina, Kit, Ariana, janet, walker and Noah for the nice responses...don't ever get in the way of a woman of ambition...I admire her...her position and accomplishments...I just thought that we could be closer than she thought....she likes her freedom...we have a nice friendship...it was me that had to make the proper adjustments so we could be friends...James |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
a dreamed name forever... sweet...sad, but sweet. |
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