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Trina Member
since 2001-06-28
Posts 97 |
no emotion at all anymore I feel but I don't make it visible for others to know what I'm feeling It's a waste anyway I strongly dislike the idea of smiling faces or looks of pity to make me feel like I'm really cared for I don't need the pitiful stares and the careless glances don't phase me I'm in my own little world none of these fools can enter They can talk of me without knowing my name yet I'll know almost every single one of theirs they may think I'm stupid and unaware of my surroundings but little do they know |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Sounds like...Me! When I was always the new girl in school everywhere I went. Didn't want to share just for the sake of sharing, I wanted someone special to share it with. I hope that someone comes along! Sincerely, Regina |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"they may think I'm stupid and unaware of my surroundings but little do they know" oh yes, I love this part!! excellent  |
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WRBreezin Member
since 2001-08-04
Posts 212 |
Emotion as clear as the day is long, sharp and biting verse...Very Good! Willie |
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Trina Member
since 2001-06-28
Posts 97 |
Thanx rwood,Sea,and WRBreezin. I hope that special someone comes along soon too. I'm glad you all liked my poem, thanx for reading and take care Trina |
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