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If All Of My Tomorrows
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If All Of My Tomorrows |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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If All Of My Tomorrows ~*Marge Tindal*~ If all of my tomorrows ~*~ contain my yesterdays I will be content in knowing, I was loved by you Yet should the dawning of beyond come calling Taking me far adrift from dreaming of thee You'll feel me walking through your heart In footsteps traced upon your memory As you traipse among the footprints I leave this thought with you Forever I was blessed Always I loved being loved by you best ~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Tomorrow's yesterdays... yes! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Marge ... this is so absolutely beautiful. Wonderful phrasing throughout. I began copying lines, but gave up ... the entire poem is incredible ... truly. "This" is why I've missed Open the last few weeks. Thank you for this lovely read Marge.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahhh, Marge, such tenderness you pull out here,,this is wonderful..very gentle smile |
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g-hm Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 85 |
What a love story. Your words are in the heart of some lucky person. This was truely a wonderful piece of art Marge, Thanks for sharing this. |
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Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
SO VERY TOUCHING BLESSINGS ON YOU MARGE FOR SHARING gentle hugs warrior |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Marge, simply beautiful! I knew it was going to be by the title. I love this!! Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ *soft smiles* Thank you. Kit~ Awwwww ! It's SO good to see you~ Thanks for letting me share with you~ Logan~ Just me little heart flowing~ *Hugs* Gail~ You're a faithful reader ... I appreciate you~  SoaringEagle~ Sweet big ole *BEAR HUGS* back at ya' !  Saunni~ Thank you for stopping in, sweetie~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ I love it when you make me cry like this I love this. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Almost missed this lovely piece both visually and poetically. The recipient of this is a lucky person, as I loved it. To see real beauty ~ being blindfolded helps! ~* Mysteria *~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Sweet girl ... you tickle me ... thank you~ Mysteria~ Made for sharing ... glad to share with you~ Thanks, gal~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
it looks like an arrowhead. or is it a heart? geesh..... i have a hard time distinguishing those two things.... ouch hehe well, i do know that if all your tomorrows contain your yesterdays then all that's left is today and so i better say this now before today is over and it becomes yesterday caught up in tomorrow... great pome, margie  |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
A lot of thought, a lot of talent and a lot of heart ... bonded in a blender and a funnel to refill your pens Is that your secret ? |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely, Marge! Corinne |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Marge, left me breathless, tender and thoughtful words. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Now that is what It, (love) just is : ) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice thoughts and format Marge...James |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I simply love this poem. And the formatting was interesting also. You add those little artistic touches that make the words even better. Sandra |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge~ I think I must have read this about 20 times by now...it's just gorgeous! "As you traipse among the footprints I leave this thought with you Forever I was blessed Always I loved being loved by you best" A more lovely verse was never penned. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
My love of my life exactly. Precious! So glad you have that loveliness in your life. Sincerely, Regina |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Marge, perfectly lovely, as always..... May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Doreen~ Just the natural flow from the heart~ Thanks, gal. Rex~ Thank you so much. Corinne~ Thanks, hon. Gemini~ I appreciate your thoughts. Zinsser~ *smiles and thanks* JamesMichael~ Glad you enjoyed it, my friend. CatalinaMoon~ Awww, just a little extra ink poured from my heart~ Thank you. Vicky~ *Special Hugs* You're a doll ! RWood~ Thanks, gal. AWhispersCaress~ Thanks, hon ... good to see you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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maeve Member
since 2001-08-01
Posts 139In the Outback |
Marge, your words always touch my heart and this is no exception. Maeve Take me home to Erin's shores, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maeve~ Thanks so much. That's why I write ... reaching out ... touching~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Marge, now I know where the yesterdays went. I loved this. Thanks for sharing, ME |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MotherEarth~ You're so welcome. It's really good to see you ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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