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MoonShadow
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Dark side of the Moon.


0 posted 08-10-2001 04:54 PM       View Profile for MoonShadow   Email MoonShadow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for MoonShadow


"Lady"

Loving eyes that light the skies
and twinkle with star light.
A lovely smile that brightens while
it warms the darkest night.

Skin so fair with light brown hair,
sometimes streaked with red.
Loving arms keep me from harm
and tell of things unsaid.

A heart that's blessed within a breast
reflects the warmth in thee.
A gentle soul, with courage bold,
and filled with love for me.

Lady, love, as God above
shall witness all that's said here,
forever more, shall I adore
with all my heart and soul dear.

I pledge thee mine, entwined with thine,
till love can climb no higher;
and at the top they tie a knot,
your red rose;... my green briar.
© Copyright 2001 Kenneth W. Myers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 08-10-2001 04:57 PM       View Profile for Lady In White   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lady In White


Lucky Lady....
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wow....definately a lucky Lady  
rwood
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Beautiful flow and sentiment. I really loved the way this read. An endearment of love.
Sincerely,
Regina
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4 posted 08-11-2001 07:38 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Soft and full of romantic love and devotion.  Very nice, MoonShadow.  She is very blessed indeed.  

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by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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5 posted 08-11-2001 09:24 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Loving eyes that light the skies
and twinkle with star light.
A lovely smile that brightens while
it warms the darkest night.
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I pledge thee mine, entwined with thine,
till love can climb no higher;
and at the top they tie a knot,
your red rose;... my green briar.
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This is EXCELLENT...
delightful writing...
wonderful cadence and imagery,
lovely poetic phrasing and vocabulary all wrapped up in a romantic intend.
very well done poet sir  
jm

I know no one is to blame
In time youll feel strength when you call my name
I know Ill never hold you again
And I know Ill never be the same
VH

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"and at the top they tie a knot,
your red rose;... my green briar."

a true lover's knot

delightful MoonShadow
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7 posted 01-09-2007 08:13 PM       View Profile for MoonShadow   Email MoonShadow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MoonShadow


  Kate... thank you for removing the dust from this one and taking it off the shelf. One of my all time favorites for the musical cadence and the feelings at its conception. I am glad to share it with you, Lady.

              MoonShadow
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