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MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

0 posted 2001-08-10 04:54 PM

"Lady"

Loving eyes that light the skies
and twinkle with star light.
A lovely smile that brightens while
it warms the darkest night.

Skin so fair with light brown hair,
sometimes streaked with red.
Loving arms keep me from harm
and tell of things unsaid.

A heart that's blessed within a breast
reflects the warmth in thee.
A gentle soul, with courage bold,
and filled with love for me.

Lady, love, as God above
shall witness all that's said here,
forever more, shall I adore
with all my heart and soul dear.

I pledge thee mine, entwined with thine,
till love can climb no higher;
and at the top they tie a knot,
your red rose;... my green briar.

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2001-08-10 04:57 PM

Lucky Lady....

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-08-11 01:04 AM

wow....definately a lucky Lady

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

3 posted 2001-08-11 06:51 PM

Beautiful flow and sentiment. I really loved the way this read. An endearment of love.
Sincerely,
Regina

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-08-11 07:38 PM

Soft and full of romantic love and devotion. Very nice, MoonShadow. She is very blessed indeed.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2001-08-11 09:24 PM

Loving eyes that light the skies
and twinkle with star light.
A lovely smile that brightens while
it warms the darkest night.
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I pledge thee mine, entwined with thine,
till love can climb no higher;
and at the top they tie a knot,
your red rose;... my green briar.
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This is EXCELLENT...
delightful writing...
wonderful cadence and imagery,
lovely poetic phrasing and vocabulary all wrapped up in a romantic intend.
very well done poet sir

jm

I know no one is to blame
In time youll feel strength when you call my name
I know Ill never hold you again
And I know Ill never be the same
VH

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

6 posted 2007-01-09 07:37 PM

"and at the top they tie a knot,
your red rose;... my green briar."

a true lover's knot

delightful MoonShadow

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

7 posted 2007-01-09 08:13 PM

Kate... thank you for removing the dust from this one and taking it off the shelf. One of my all time favorites for the musical cadence and the feelings at its conception. I am glad to share it with you, Lady.

MoonShadow
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