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ryun
Junior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 33
elsinore, ca, usa

0 posted 2001-08-10 04:25 PM


We live by our weeknesses
and die by our love
shoving egos aside and
killing whats left of the
pide..

Open arms the vulnerabilitys aside
from the facts
the propabilitys
instigatin intuition
all these anomalys
bogling, mind
togles towrd trees
aside from the
fact the fractls
in the glass
abstract art class
cleaning the
boots of proffesor
some one else
learning secrets
no one knows
bottled up and
it glows let
let's all sit
off on some other ****
minds echoing nonsense
apart fromt the past
tense i leave
and let go
of the presant

Falling clear
of all my fears
on an ocean
of misery
floating down
on the boat
of passionate perplexities
livin life in
the gray areas
wher no one's
ever gonna here ya..

behind the
walls from under
the stairs
we all come clear
we all show fears
loving everything
that loves me
never clear
never shedded no tears
over a girl thats weird
cept the mineral known
for carying energy
fractled mineral, crystal...
uh fist full of hate
love, resentment
past present
questioning how why..

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walker
Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida
1 posted 2001-08-10 04:39 PM


We can love alone but not hate alone. Hate is like poison. Love sets you free. Love doesn't know pride. I like this poem, full of emotions.
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