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ryun
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since 2000-01-25
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elsinore, ca, usa

0 posted 2001-08-10 04:10 PM


i sit at my desk still falling.. calling her name in my mind, repeated thru time.. over and over.. pounding.. my eyes long for that smile, falling into a hole dwelling on what is real.. longing for her touch.. for just one second.. is that to much?..

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walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida
1 posted 2001-08-10 04:26 PM


Lovely expression of love. It's not easy that emotion/verb,(love)
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