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Lady In White
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0 posted 2001-08-10 03:49 PM


inbetweening



on slipped plane
the one between
the here of now
in cosmic sheen
where colors none
but brightly shown
and love is one
my soul is drawn

‘tis not glass nor
mirror nor crystalline
but plain as clear
forever’s seen
behind eye’s lid
images cavort
held in the long,
love, albeit short

is this the time
plain ‘pon plane
where mystery
now goes again
and colors have
rose again
and blend becomes
our when again

so in this my
here of now
beg my arms
in your somehow
know of need
in dark of night
on slipped plane
to be ours, again


[This message has been edited by Lady In White (edited 08-10-2001).]

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citizenx
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1 posted 2001-08-10 04:22 PM


The word beautiful is so overused but what other word can I use to describe this piece
For it is beautiful
‘tis not glass nor
mirror nor crystalline
but plain as clear
forever’s seen
behind eye’s lid
images cavort
held in the long,
love, albeit short

shadows flicker sweet end tame
dancing like crazy mourners" magazine


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2 posted 2001-08-10 05:21 PM


Oh to be able to live on the plane where love lives. This is a beauty. Much enjoyed.
Sandra

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3 posted 2001-08-10 05:53 PM


LadyInWhite~
Soft cascade of thoughts~
You do this nicely, you know ?

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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4 posted 2001-08-10 06:22 PM


‘tis not glass nor
mirror nor crystalline
but plain as clear
forever’s seen
behind eye’s lid
images cavort
held in the long,
love, albeit short

is this the time
plain ‘pon plane
where mystery
now goes again
and colors have
rose again
and blend becomes
our when again

so in this my
here of now
beg my arms
in your somehow
know of need
in dark of night
on slipped plane
to be ours, again
=================================

Lady...once again I wish take one of yours for my own...
this is exquisite and delicate and pure poetry...
and it wraps around an empty place in me and fills me with an emerald glow.
thank you for that dear poetess
jm

I know no one is to blame
In time youll feel strength when you call my name
I know Ill never hold you again
And I know Ill never be the same
VH

Logan
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5 posted 2001-08-10 07:20 PM


Ahh, yes, those slipped planes, the ones between where anything is possible..you did a very nice provocative write here, very well done..very gentle smile
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6 posted 2001-08-10 08:40 PM


Lady--the place between then and now
where love is drawn in crystal dew
and time is crinkled with color melding
you have lit this place perfect hew.

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with you
7 posted 2001-08-11 01:17 AM


Lady~ I love it when you write like this, which is often!!   So pretty  
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8 posted 2001-08-11 01:33 AM


Well Lady, he he, I am so glad you have your "Crayola" box out tonight, and I am not even going to try to tell you how much I like the picture you drew.

To see real beauty ~ being blindfolded helps!   ~* Mysteria *~

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9 posted 2001-08-11 07:59 AM



Lady in White, your presentation and passion is soul engaging. Greatly enjoyed!

Willie

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10 posted 2001-08-11 08:14 AM


...and again and again... and it can be..
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