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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
The Plead  head thrown back arms raised to blue in beseech of tears to drown rooted fears fingertips wavering blown about by sighs naked before you I am sorrow realized a bit of life still in me remains, my skin crusted by time, my words, but lost rhyme though I raise me upward in my silent seek see vestige of me still know my silence speaks |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
fingertips wavering blown about by sighs naked before you I am sorrow realized a bit of life still in me remains, my skin crusted by time, my words, but lost rhyme though I raise me upward in my silent seek see vestige of me still ============================== very very cool m'lady... thy muse finds inspire in the most clever of places. well done poetess of white...very well done I know no one is to blame |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
"fingertips wavering blown about by sighs naked before you I am sorrow realized" Wonderful poem, but these lines made my breath catch. beautifully put. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
A touch of green remains, A dream of being strains, Catching dreams within the sighs Ever reaching to the skies Very nice Enjoyed your writing Gloom |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Professor Gloom....a wonderful addition...I know you are a hard poet to please, so I am truly humbled by your response. Thank you! Constance...thank you so very much for sharing your thoughts on this with me... JanetMarie, what might I say, little Moth, that you will not turn around and outshine? Warm hugs, little one.... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautifully done, Lady! I can really feel these words! |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Isn't it the touch of green that counts? For it is life, going past what is dead, to reach out, to seek, to live..nice write..very gentle smile |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyInWhite~ Awesome ! 'see vestige of me still know my silence speaks' Yeah ... awesome ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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