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SEA
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0 posted 08-10-2001 01:06 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SEA

He asked me what he meant to me
one night snuggled by the fire
I smiled and said you are my only love
my one true desire……….

He asked how deep my love
inside me went……..
I told him my passion
could never be spent

He asked if  he was
all I would need
I said my heart is an open book
just read………

then I looked him
straight in the eye
and I whispered ~
till the day I die………..

………..you will now
and forever be
all of everything
in this world to me………

the sound of the echoes of my soul.....
the waves crashing in my sea........
the rain storm raging......
healing me.....


~SEA~

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Lady In White
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1 posted 08-10-2001 01:07 PM       View Profile for Lady In White   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lady In White


Brava!
Janet Marie
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2 posted 08-10-2001 01:13 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

then I looked him
straight in the eye
and I whispered ~
till the day I die………..

………..you will now
and forever be
all of everything
in this world to me………

the sound of the echoes of my soul.....
the waves crashing in my sea........
the rain storm raging......
healing me.....
================================


*smiling again*
with every new write...youre tapping into that part of your muse that takes your poetry to new heights...
very very cool write Susan.
IWIHWT  

I know no one is to blame
In time youll feel strength when you call my name
I know Ill never hold you again
And I know Ill never be the same
VH

SEA
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3 posted 08-10-2001 02:45 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

thank you both  
this was a remembering for me  
PoeticKnight
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4 posted 08-10-2001 03:14 PM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoeticKnight

What a great remembering. Awesome poetic phrases and intent. I can feel this one. Keep it up SEA.
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5 posted 08-10-2001 03:29 PM       View Profile for JBaker515   Email JBaker515   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JBaker515

SUSAN,
i loved this~~

THis was so good, and it was very sweet!

~Jeff~

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-Brooke Shields

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6 posted 08-10-2001 04:16 PM       View Profile for walker   Email walker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for walker

Love is beautiful, this is love. Thanks.
Logan
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7 posted 08-10-2001 07:24 PM       View Profile for Logan   Email Logan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Logan

Geez, SEA, you have him at your feet, well done, geez, very well done...very gentle smile
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8 posted 08-10-2001 07:34 PM       View Profile for MoonShadow   Email MoonShadow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MoonShadow

Sooooooo Nice!  (sigh)
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9 posted 08-10-2001 07:51 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

i hope you still have that everything.... sounds like all to me...... i've never had that, ever..... i feel a bit envious but at the same time, so very happy for you that you've experienced this joy

you've written it well...... thank you for the read
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10 posted 08-10-2001 07:54 PM       View Profile for rosepetals25   Email rosepetals25   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rosepetals25

Susan,

    Ohh I reallllyyy like this one! I think this is one of my favorites! So sweet and loving  ~sighs~  Awwwwwwww is the best thing to say

TaraB

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*claps* very nice  
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12 posted 08-10-2001 08:50 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

SEA~
Just BEAUTIFUL ~
Thank you for sharing your remembering time~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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13 posted 08-10-2001 09:42 PM       View Profile for helen smith   Email helen smith   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for helen smith

yes ..so beautiful
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14 posted 08-11-2001 10:51 AM       View Profile for rwood   Email rwood   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rwood

the sound of the echoes of my soul.....
the waves crashing in my sea........
the rain storm raging......
healing me.....


A great answer! I love this part, so vast the emotion.

Sincerely,
Regina
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15 posted 08-11-2001 11:09 AM       View Profile for Zinsser   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Zinsser

Beautiful!
Corinne
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16 posted 08-11-2001 12:12 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Very passionate!

Cor
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17 posted 08-11-2001 01:18 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Beautiful Susan!  Full of passions and remembrance, a lovely write, much enjoyed!  

Best wishes,
/Kit
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18 posted 08-11-2001 01:22 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

You do put your whole heart into your poetry
Very well done
Liz
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19 posted 08-11-2001 02:11 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

SEA, this is truly one of your best. So loving and caring and true.  I am a true romantic you know?

" I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis"

Kay

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20 posted 08-11-2001 02:18 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

So ... Are we still on for friday night?

couldn't resist
Rex
~~~
Excellent write Sea
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21 posted 08-11-2001 02:27 PM       View Profile for Waseem Cheema   Email Waseem Cheema   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Waseem Cheema

Very good and beautiful like always
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22 posted 08-11-2001 04:33 PM       View Profile for Ethan Halo   Email Ethan Halo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ethan Halo's Home Page   View IP for Ethan Halo

what a lucky guy.

absolutely beautiful words...

Everyone's got their demons.
We all got somethin to atone for.

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23 posted 08-11-2001 07:53 PM       View Profile for maeve   Email maeve   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for maeve

SEA......what can I say but "beautiful"??

Maeve

Take me home to Erin's shores,
to where my heart roams free.

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24 posted 08-11-2001 08:07 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Very tender and loving.

I enjoyed Susan  

Maree
 
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