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slipknot
Junior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 25


0 posted 2001-08-10 05:14 AM


So lost and alone
My own pain all that I had known
Noone to help
Nobody could
My thoughts, My feelings
Even when asked,
Nobody would

Like a shot in the arm
There she was
Beauty like this can cause no harm
Finally, could somebody care
How do I feel?
So much that I love to share

My heart was opened
Pumping with life
This painfull shell
She makes me shed

A smile greets every day
To talk with someone
Who may not always understand
But, who always
Is there with her helping hand

The haze is gone
Any other way
Seems so wrong
Just to share my life with you
Nothing else
Would I love to do

So with new hope
And a brighter sight
Your thoughts and life
My heart holds so tight
A wonderful girl is she...

Thank you Dena

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rwood
Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
1 posted 2001-08-10 10:07 PM


What a wonderful tribute! Special and sincere. I enjoyed this awakening very much.
Sincerely,
Regina

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