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Open Poetry #15

Reflections

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

0 posted 2001-08-10 04:15 AM

"Reflections"

When love grows so much inside,
more than the heart can hold,
it flows to others in a tide
and returns ten thousand fold.

That which overwhelms me so
and reaches out to you,
comes back to me in your sweet glow
and warms me through and through.

I see the love within your soul
reflected in your eyes.
It adds to mine... tow halves.. a whole,
enough to fill the skies.

Reflections in the moonlit pool...
reflections in the skies...
reflections in my heart and soul...
refelctions in our eyes.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-08-11 11:15 AM

this says it all. . . to get, you must give. . .

wonderful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-08-11 03:01 PM

making me *SIGH

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-08-11 03:44 PM

MoonShadow~
This is just such a lovely affirmation of unconditional love~
Very nicely done~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

4 posted 2001-08-11 03:52 PM

I loved this poem, very sweet and tender words.

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

5 posted 2001-08-11 04:13 PM

wonderful sentiment, and i like the rhythm...
but as someone above said...
*sigh*

Everyone's got their demons.
We all got somethin to atone for.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

6 posted 2001-08-11 04:25 PM

MoonShadow-
   What a tender and heartfelt write.
   Lovely thoughts you've penned here.

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

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