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MoonShadow
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Dark side of the Moon.

0 posted 2001-08-09 04:53 PM



"Dreams"

Dreams, they are such special things
like wonderful bright toys.
They comfort me with happiness;
sweet and youthful joys.

Dreams, they come at twilight time,
or any time of day,
when my thoughs slip in between the practical and play.

Dreams, they take shape and come to view
like visions in my mind.
They warm my heart with thoughts of you
and leave my cares behind.

Dreams, sweet dreams, are magic spells
that keep my soul afire,
with thoughts of you to make me soar
till I can go no higher.

Dreams are things within my heart,
that bring you close to me;
thoughtful wishes from my soul,
desires that long to be.


© Copyright 2001 Kenneth W. Myers - All Rights Reserved
Lady In White
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1 posted 2001-08-09 05:07 PM



It is so nice to see a fellow be able to write soft, soothing thoughts....

well done Sir....

and by the way, I like your Constructive Critique message...

MoonShadow
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Dark side of the Moon.
2 posted 2001-08-09 06:09 PM


Lady in White, thank you for your kind comments. My words come from the softer side of me. It is not unmanly to express it... and if it wells up inside to overflowing... then it must present itself. In so doing, if by your reading my work, your soul is touched.. then both our souls are blessed by the sharing. Again, I thank you for your kind comments and encouragement, Milady.
Dulcinea
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3 posted 2001-08-09 07:21 PM


That is truly how I feel about someone very special I know...beautiful! *sigh*
Enchantress
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4 posted 2001-08-14 08:17 PM


Dreams and magic spells...two of my most favourite things. This one touched the child in my soul.
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with you
5 posted 2001-08-14 09:15 PM



"Dreams are things within my heart,
that bring you close to me;
thoughtful wishes from my soul,
desires that long to be."


this touches deep*  
loved this  

MoonShadow
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6 posted 2001-08-15 04:43 PM


Dulcinea, Enchantress and SEA:
    Thank you for sharing your enjoyment. The reflected glow is most rewarding and warming. I am most humbled and grateful.

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