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Open Poetry #15

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Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-08-09 04:33 PM

spirits beribboned
tying up thoughts with neat bows
presence just for you

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2001-08-09 05:00 PM

Something about the 'neat bows' tying it all together, just made me feel good.

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

2 posted 2001-08-09 06:15 PM

Lovely Haiku, Milady.. I am drawn to the most ingenius play on words with the "presence" vs "presents".... either would fit most lovely... but the sound is so close as to create the image of either one with as much power. One wonderful play that made me smile. Your wit as well as your poetic talent is very apparent. Great Job!

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

3 posted 2001-08-09 08:55 PM

What a lovely thought you have brought there..very well done indeed..very gentle smile

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2001-08-09 09:05 PM

Lady In White-
   Very nice write..
   I LOVE the play on words...very creative.
   Wonderful!

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

5 posted 2001-08-09 10:08 PM

This presents a presence that is very well done. I loved your verses.

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