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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2001-08-09 03:38 PM

Upon request,
I picked up pen
to write
my story over--
I painted days
with skies of blue
and planted
fields of clover.
I dried my tears
of wasted years
each page
a simple rhyme...
and as I wrote,
my heart just broke--
a wail of words
from mime.

Torrential rain--
glass sheets of pain,
a storm that travels sea...
The rocking boat,
remained afloat,
most miraculously.
And at last
when storm had passed,
a rainbow, I did see.
When then occurred
these simple words:
"My life is boring
without me..."

*repost from Open #9 by request of a special friend*

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2001-08-09 03:42 PM

I am so very glad a special friend came along and asked this of you...

hope you are doing well, my friend...

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-08-09 03:49 PM

Gosh, I loved those last words in this, loved it!

" I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis"

Kay

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

3 posted 2001-08-09 03:52 PM

When then occurred
these simple words:
"My life is boring
without me..."

We would be lost without you.
Another rainbow will grace your life again.

citizenx
Member

since 2001-07-31

Posts 189
motorcade

4 posted 2001-08-09 05:04 PM

And at last
when storm had passed,
a rainbow, I did see.
When then occurred
these simple words:
"My life is boring
without me..."

I am smiling here. I am glad that you found a rainbow, something special always lies at the end of one. Really enjoyed this one seren.

shadows flicker sweet end tame
dancing like crazy mourners" magazine

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-08-09 08:03 PM

~Hug-A-Bump~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

6 posted 2001-08-09 08:12 PM

Soul searchingly beautiful, I'm so glad you found a special friend. It is emportant to look at things from different angles.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

7 posted 2001-08-09 09:23 PM

'And at last
when storm had passed,
a rainbow, I did see.
When then occurred
these simple words:
"My life is boring
without me..." '

This is a fantastic write, serenity...thanks for reposting...I did not have the pleasure of reading it the first time around...this is a wonnderfully encouraging piece...I love it...

sp

no power in creation,
no mortal complication,
will ever stop me from being with you...

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

8 posted 2001-08-09 09:28 PM

serenity-

Oh how I love this!
Wonderful write, sweet friend...

"And at last
when storm had passed,
a rainbow, I did see.
When then occurred
these simple words:
"My life is boring
without me..."

Much truth and wisdom in these words.
Big hugs,
~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

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