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Lady In White
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0 posted 2001-08-09 02:23 PM



Soft Touch

in the reach, fingers only touching air
she searches for soft, a feel, mayhap care
something ethereal, perhaps yet not there
but his words come so soft, and she would share

in the reach, this feel that comes to her skin
invading serene delights there within
how best as to enlighten lovely whims
as if liquid mead touches golden brim

heady ‘tis, this reach to touch forever
how she delights in his presence clever
so safe, there, in her heart, not to sever
she to be all his heart’s light endeavor

so she shall reach for the soft of his soul
a life’s goal, to be whole, upon his shoal


[This message has been edited by Lady In White (edited 08-09-2001).]

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citizenx
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1 posted 2001-08-09 02:26 PM


"so she shall reach for the soft of his soul
a life’s goal, to be whole, upon his shoal"


breath taking thoughts,

shadows flicker sweet end tame
dancing like crazy mourners" magazine


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2 posted 2001-08-09 02:36 PM


A soft touch is felt much more deeply and much more permanently than a heavy hand - Nicely said, Lady...
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3 posted 2001-08-09 03:29 PM


oh my yes!  
to my library you go!!  

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4 posted 2001-08-09 06:33 PM


I need a woman with a soft touch...James
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5 posted 2001-08-09 07:28 PM


in the reach, this feel that comes to her skin
invading serene delights there within
how best as to enlighten lovely whims
as if liquid mead touches golden brim

heady ‘tis, this reach to touch forever
how she delights in his presence clever
so safe, there, in her heart, not to sever
she to be all his heart’s light endeavor
===========================

OH MY...
Lady...you have both THE touch and BEEN touched...
this is LOVELY...and tis a keeper
me thanks you  

I know no one is to blame
In time youll feel strength when you call my name
I know Ill never hold you again
And I know Ill never be the same
VH

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6 posted 2001-08-09 08:45 PM


Ahh, in the reach, you may do fine, for you will know if there is a sign...a very lovely write and I love the pic as it looks just like the sloughs we have around here..very gentle smile
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7 posted 2001-08-09 09:07 PM


Beautifully written the words tell of true wisdom of the heart.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.

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