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Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
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Escondido-California

0 posted 2001-08-09 11:10 AM


Hi everyone,

I apologize for my lack of attendance,
I was having a lot of prob's with my
inter net service and poor little puter
but I am hoping it is all fixed up now,


Your Dreams Finding Solidarity

Natures breath thrashes about
stirring up the senses
opening ones mind to dreaming,
thoughts do ascend sight unseen
hopefully towards fruitful gain.

Knowing some shall fall as acorns
rendering it’s self to decay
among thriving thistles,
those finding a stronghold live on
as cherished gifts in hearts center.

No matter how the dreams occur
weather twinkling of the pupil
or in necessity’s furry,
the renders must possess
adequate desire to thrive well.

To ask something, desire its birth
have wisdom to see beyond the
shroud of prevailing winds
keeping clear minded of it’s masked
arrival, for most come disguised!

For your dreams to find sure-footing
solidarity upon the
rock-mass of reality, you
must turn them to heart felt emotions
with fulfillment as end result.

Not taking the chance on your dreams
just tossing them to the wind not
giving them motion is to stand
stagnate in your own mire
giving no solidarity!

Next time you’re among
the beauty and tranquillity
of nature and your dreams begin
to surface go ahead cast them
out they shall return fruitfully.

By, Cerenity


  

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-08-09 11:16 AM


Cerenity~
Really good to see you with such a lovely read~

'those finding a stronghold live on
as cherished gifts in hearts center'


Yes, indeedy !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2001-08-09 11:26 AM


Cerenity,
That's quite an entrance back beautiful and welcome.

Decaflame
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3 posted 2001-08-09 11:26 AM



Cerenity - this certainly likes me...

quote:
For your dreams to find sure-footing
solidarity upon the
rock-mass of reality


Well done!

citizenx
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since 2001-07-31
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motorcade
4 posted 2001-08-09 02:22 PM


For your dreams to find sure-footing
solidarity upon the
rock-mass of reality, you
must turn them to heart felt emotions
with fulfillment as end result.


Ellen, some strong and beautifully written image here, I really enjoyed this.

shadows flicker sweet end tame
dancing like crazy mourners" magazine


Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
5 posted 2001-08-10 08:42 AM


Hi Everyone,

Thank you so much for your kind replys to my work, the muse has still been on vacation but I think it was OK cause of all of the trouble I was having with this little puter of mine, thank you again.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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6 posted 2001-08-11 11:13 AM


OK Cerenity, I've got a bag full of dreams here. . .let's see what happens. . .

wonderful work my friend. . .  

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