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RMW
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0 posted 2001-08-09 09:56 AM


The Heart of Theater

Come slip within
My folded rows,
One
By
One,
That petals drawn against the cold,
Down will come,
Left and right,
A bloom to greet
The opening night.

RMW

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1 posted 2001-08-09 09:57 AM



the lights dim...
the curtain,
raised...

magic

RMW
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2 posted 2001-08-09 09:57 AM


Thank you.
Martie
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3 posted 2001-08-09 10:09 AM


Bob...Another unique look through your eyes.  You know I love the reference to flower opening..who but you would have done such a comparison?  Much enjoyed!
MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
4 posted 2001-08-09 11:19 AM




Wonderful.....

You cast your own magic here....

And I agree with Martie that the comparison you made is quite wonderful....

Thank you
************************


"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of these recurring..........
Of myself forever reproaching myself,
for who more foolish than I......"
~Whitman~

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5 posted 2001-08-09 11:29 AM


Nice to see you back, Bob. Lovely writing! You never dissapoint in the mystery zone.

Cor

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6 posted 2001-08-09 11:32 AM


"The play is the thing....."

paladin

Irish Rose
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7 posted 2001-08-09 02:13 PM


I haven't been to the theatre in ages and I use the programs to fan myself, God, I feel old.

" I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis"

Kay

RMW
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8 posted 2001-08-09 06:40 PM


Martie, Melody, Corinne, Paladin and Irish Rose....thank you all. Most kind. Bob
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9 posted 2001-08-14 05:16 PM


well now Bob... this one indeed is a gem....

I enjoyed a great deal as usual...


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