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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2001-08-09 07:25 AM


    Function

I feel the winds
Their textured blow
Filled with all
That I would know.

Touching me with history
In velvet soft intensity.

It is an unction,
Lubricant.
A salve and
Slow intoxicant.

Webbing me with kingdoms reign
But in the key of Cain.

It weighs and wears
The sky and sea
It rules what is
Eternity.

A mystery and orthodox.
It blows a constant paradox.

© Copyright 2001 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
wpwpoet
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1 posted 2001-08-09 08:08 AM


"the key of cain" love it! love it! there is so much in that one phrase. a prophetic statement in itself...wpwpoet
Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-08-09 08:32 AM



Even your brevity becomes you, Sy...so much said....

you are a marvel...

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2001-08-09 09:00 AM


Wpwpoet,
Enjoyed your comment, thanks.

Sunshine,,
Thank you for your ray of sunshine this morning.

vlraynes
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4 posted 2001-08-09 09:35 AM



Seymour-
   This is wonderful!  I love it!  
   You never cease to amaze me with the
   wonders that pour from your pen.

   hugs,
   ~vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2001-08-09 09:39 AM


Vlraynes,
You are the kindest of kind, thank you.

SEA
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6 posted 2001-08-09 10:22 AM


Seymour~ I think this is fabulous!!! I am keeping this one  
Janet Marie
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7 posted 2001-08-09 10:49 AM


I feel the winds
Their textured blow
Filled with all
That I would know.

Touching me with history
In velvet soft intensity.
================================

and I do so love when thy poetic winds blow...
tis a breeze of please
a gust of trust
a current of cool
a draft of poetic craft
a zephyr of clever
a tempest of truth
a warm wind of wisdoms intend

*winkiewinkie*
me

I know no one is to blame
In time youll feel strength when you call my name
I know Ill never hold you again
And I know Ill never be the same
VH

Nan
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8 posted 2001-08-09 11:00 AM


You've always got some wonderful words of wisdom for me, m'friend - I love opening your posts...  
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9 posted 2001-08-09 11:00 AM


Seymour~
Uniquely YOU !
And therefore .... brilliantly penned~

You have such a wonderful way with words~
Thank you for being a poet !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2001-08-09 11:13 AM


Sea,
Thank you for keeping this one. *L*

JM,
A bouquet of comps, Love Ya.
Winkiewinkie  Stinkt

Nan,
Thank you for the kisses. Love ya Sy

Marge,
And thank you for just being there. *L*

Cerenity
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11 posted 2001-08-10 01:17 AM


Hi Sy,

I have seen the unseen as you in this so lovely a piece, just awesome how your pen sails the blank page and produces such beauty and yes it's a keeper,,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2001-08-10 08:20 AM


Cerenity,
Thank you and bless you my dear.

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