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The Symphony Of Your Love
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The Symphony Of Your Love |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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If the world were to end tomorrow and all the material things we once owned were no more - taken with the wind lost at sea gone forever We would still possess the most priceless of gifts - our love for one another Your love is worth more to me than gold It lays deep within my heart and encases my inner being Your love is like a sacred jewel - a treasure chest within my soul the chain of gold around my neck Your love burns like an eternal flame that lights my way and warms my heart You are the music accompanying my words as our hearts sing perfectly in tune like a beautiful symphony No audience is required for this spectacular show We have all we need - two lovers two hearts one soul and a neverending ballad of love Suetang |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Splendid write, Sue. You truly are wealthy and blessed my friend. Never let it go.  All writing comes |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
 This is so beautiful!!!!" I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Lone Wolf & Irish Rose Thank you both so much for reading and enjoying this piece. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Suetang, It's so nice to see someone in such splended love and this is so beautiful, enjoyed very much. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Superb! Intimacy in perfect tune, timing, and harmony! Sincerely, Regina |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Suetang, so very beautiful! I feel like I am repeating myself, but I am serious, I find it beautiful! Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SueTang~ Such adoringly gentle thoughts~ You have played the symphony of the heart~ *brava* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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WRBreezin Member
since 2001-08-04
Posts 212 |
as our hearts sing perfectly in tune like a beautiful symphony No audience is required The sweet solitude of a love so endearing...Just Great! Willie |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
let the music continue. . . I really like the form of this poem. . . kind of reminded me of that "Sonata form". . . aba. . . great job. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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