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wpwpoet Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 99 |
any Ideas for a title? I was thinking of Kashmir Essence what do you think? The breeze lifts a soft sweet fragrance of sunshine and I dreamed a little A scent of musk and spice, warmed my soul With a silk and kashmir caress and I dreamed a little soft sweet fragrence of sunshine... co012500wpw [This message has been edited by wpwpoet (edited 08-09-2001).] |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
wpwpoet, Fragrant Dream? Sweet Illusion? |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
"sunkissed daydreams and perfumed skies" ???? liked it... nice imagery...thanks for the read [This message has been edited by doreen peri (edited 08-08-2001).] |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
wpwpoet, Fragrant Dream? Sweet Illusion? Sachet? |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very pretty! How about Soft Scents? |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Scents Sense |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WPWPoet~ Nice imagery. Perhaps~ Dreaming ~ Makes Scents To Me  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
whispering sweet? Nah, I'm not good at titles. But this is a very pretty write, flows lightly and magically. Sandra |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Scent of essential ascent |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
hmmmmmmmmmm. . . Essence of Silk?? well, whatever title you decide on. . .it's a great poem. . . --------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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