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Sven
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0 posted 2001-08-08 01:39 PM


forget me not
my green-eyed love,
though storms appear
in skies above

let not the clouds
obscure my heart
I love thee still
as from the start

I hold this light
of love for thee
and shall always
as love doth be

my green-eyed love,
my only wish
is to be thine,
and just as missed

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

© Copyright 2001 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
1 posted 2001-08-08 01:45 PM




Forget me not......


I may assure that she won't forget you....not with your sweet poetry..

Another sweet loving piece .......and oh.....you know I always love that........

Thank you my friend.......
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"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of these recurring..........
Of myself forever reproaching myself,
for who more foolish than I......"
~Whitman~

VAS
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2 posted 2001-08-08 01:51 PM


Sven, this is a wonderful piece. Your green-eyed sweetie will surely not be controlled by the 'green-eyed monster.'  


JamesMichael
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3 posted 2001-08-08 03:15 PM


Sven can't tell you how many times I was sitting here missing someone and wondering if they were also missing me...in most cases not...but I was hoping...real hard...James
Irish Rose
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4 posted 2001-08-08 04:35 PM


Ok, I just can't stop my fingers from typing this, when I read this title? I immediately thought of "Please don't eat the daisies"

" I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis"

Kay

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2001-08-08 05:01 PM


Sven,
Who could forget you. Enjoyed

catalinamoon
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6 posted 2001-08-08 06:05 PM


Very lovely, who could forget such a wonderful person.
Sandra

wpwpoet
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7 posted 2001-08-08 07:03 PM


to forget! would be that trajic loss, and you my friend will be not forgot...
peace love and understanding...wpwpoet

Sven
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8 posted 2001-08-08 07:43 PM


Enchanted Melody, thank you my friend. . . I am glad that you've enjoyed. . .  

VAS, I can only hope that you're right. . . since she exists only in my mind. . . thank you. . .

James, I do that too my friend. . . if wishing could make it so. . . thank you. . .

Irish Rose, LOL   that's a favorite show of mine!  Thanks for reading. . .

Sy, you'd be surprised my friend. . .   thank you Sir. . .

Sandra, see above note, and thank you my wonderful friend. . .  

wpwpoet, to forget is to indeed lose my friend. . . thank you for your words. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

maeve
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In the Outback
9 posted 2001-08-08 08:27 PM


Sven, oh to be remembered like that instead of being the one doing the remembering.

Maeve

Take me home to Erin's shores,
to where my heart roams free.

Denise
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10 posted 2001-08-08 08:38 PM


This is sooooooo beautiful, Sven! *sigh*
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