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VAS
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0 posted 2001-08-08 01:18 PM


How Fragile These Moments
Virginia Salter

out in the darkness
a barking calls all to attention
night stands ready
with all it hides from one’s eyes

depth of blackness
lessened only by spots of light
in the distant sky
and a sliver of moon
passes by

a whistle’s heard
it’s the wind in the trees
a moan has stirred
I fall to my knees

a prayer on my lips
“Please keep me nigh
beneath your wings
as the villains vie.”

I rise to shut out the night
one door, then two
I quietly reach
just beyond my furtive steps
my eyes straining into the depth

of ebony that stares at me
from beyond the glow
that winks through kitchen window
onto just inches of lanai
how fragile my moments be

if only
you
were here with me

© August 26.  2000

© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30
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1 posted 2001-08-08 01:39 PM




I rise to shut out the night
one door, then two
I quietly reach
just beyond my furtive steps
my eyes straining into the depth

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how fragile my moments be

if only
you
were here with me

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A very wonderful and powerful images......and the sad tone of this blended softly with the images of the night and darkness makes it all more touching and deep...

I quite enjoyed it.....

Thank you
******************************

"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of these recurring..........
Of myself forever reproaching myself,
for who more foolish than I......"
~Whitman~

VAS
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2 posted 2001-08-08 01:47 PM


thanks, lots, MEM, you have given wonderful encouragement, so glad you enjoyed!
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3 posted 2001-08-09 12:19 PM


Virginia this was a very well done piece, and the images you created were excellent, you had me right to the end.  Great job!

~ To see real beauty you must look with your heart ~
           ~* Mysteria *~

VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
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4 posted 2001-08-09 01:52 AM


Thank you, Mysteria. Your words mean a great deal to me. Some people have sure been praying well, I'm getting bits and pieces of work finally to help me make it through summer. Now, if I'm supposed to leave sub-teaching, I need one of the private sector jobs to come through that will be full-time employment. Though I have much less time to get on here, at least I might be able to pay for my internet service...sounds like an oxymoron, doesn't it.  
Beki
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5 posted 2001-08-09 03:06 AM


"how fragile my moments be

if only
you
were here with me"

lovely, sweetly says it all!

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