Sky themes (western haiku)

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Open Poetry #15

Sky themes (western haiku)

paladin

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since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

0 posted 2001-08-08 09:57 AM

Dawn

Day awakes
Spreads across the sky
nature yawns

Sun

Brazen eye
Looks over us all
never blinks

Clouds

Soft white clouds
form animal shapes
airborne zoo

Grey

Loneliness
Deep despairing sky
rain for tears

Dusk

Colors change
Palette in the west
paints the sky

Night

Stars come out
Each finding their place
taking turns

paladin

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Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2001-08-08 10:02 AM

Each revolution
Bearing wisdom for mankind
Yields evolution

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

2 posted 2001-08-08 12:50 PM

Oh yes...airborn zoo! Love it!

mirror man
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since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

3 posted 2001-08-08 01:17 PM

I enjoyed this. Very good.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2001-08-08 01:25 PM

Enjoyed all of this but my favorites were Clouds, Dusk and Night.

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

5 posted 2001-08-08 02:12 PM

Robert,
I liked this collection of haiku, a well rounded set.In GREY should the word despiring be despairing? Night is my favorite of this set. Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

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