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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Forget me now I am forgot within me think the things I ought to live another yesterday and bold receipt of all I bought-- a church in chime won't ring again the chapel rhymes in spite of sin like a fish by one fin caught to swim again the thoughts of naught.... every yester-rhyme rings true every tear swims home to you every droplet drips in seek a river, dredging you in me. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
"a fish by one fin caught..." what a magnificent line......  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Forget me now I am forgot within me think the things I ought to live another yesterday and bold receipt of all I bought-- =============================== a river, dredging you in me. =============================== lots of magnificent lines in this lil gem of heart. hugs baby  mewont you sing me your poetry |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Yanno...you writing really makes me think, and that is a good thing, the images and lines in this were absolutely fantastic Serenity! ~ To see real beauty you must look with your heart ~ |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Woow....you never cease to amaze me! Another beautiful write. One that needs to be read again and again to be fully appreciated. Hugs to you talented poetess, ~Krista  "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
No forgetting these lines.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, You caught me with this one and not by one fin. a wonderful write. Sy |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
serenity- I must echo the masses...this is just full of incredible lines. Absolutely wonderful write, my friend! A definite keeper! hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 08-09-2001).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"every yester rhyme rings true'... Surely does... Nicely penned, my friend..  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ 'every yester-rhyme rings true every tear swims home to you every droplet drips in seek a river, dredging you in me.' What a moving voice of poetry you are~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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citizenx Member
since 2001-07-31
Posts 189motorcade |
OUCH I hear your pain, powerful words. "like a fish by one fin caught to swim again the thoughts of naught...." |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You dip your poet pen in the ink of yester-thought And what wonderful phrases it has magically wrought Well done! Liz |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I wanted to pop in quickly to say thanks to everyone--hopefully I can write happier thoughts in days to come. Love to all, with gratitude. |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
What an intreging write it's full of wonderful lines. I must read it again Throw your heart out in front of you |
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