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MoonShadow
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Dark side of the Moon.


0 posted 08-07-2001 07:55 PM       View Profile for MoonShadow   Email MoonShadow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for MoonShadow

"Wind"

Something in the dark spoke my name,
softly to my ears clearly came;
whispers in the night,
soft as candle light,
doubtless they were there... all the same.

Something in my heart felt the pain,
stirring memories there once again;
gentle fingers touch,
feather light and such,
soothing, glowing fires... clensing rain.

Something in my mind drew me near,
to a calmer time without fear;
hidden in the past,
things that could not last,
haunting, taunting sounds... in my ear.

Something in the wind called to me,
subtle sounding voice though it be;
musical refreain,
each note clearly plain,
penetrates my soul... sets me free.

© Copyright 2001 Kenneth W. Myers - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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with you


1 posted 08-07-2001 07:57 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Welcome!!   this is gorgeous.....I really like this   great first post  
snowpants
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KS


2 posted 08-07-2001 08:00 PM       View Profile for snowpants   Email snowpants   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit snowpants's Home Page   View IP for snowpants

Wonderful images and rhyme...welcome to Passions!  Great write!

sp  

it was love that first drew me,
it is love that will keep me here...
now I see love burning brightly
when everything else is unclear...

Lone Wolf
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since 03-16-2000
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Lansing, MI USA


3 posted 08-07-2001 08:01 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Wonderful flow and rhyme scheme here, Wind.  Beautiful work for your first post.  Welcome to Passions!!  I look forward to reading more.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Janet Marie
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since 01-22-2000
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4 posted 08-07-2001 08:02 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Something in the dark spoke my name,
softly to my ears clearly came;
whispers in the night,
soft as candle light,
doubtless they were there... all the same.

Something in my heart felt the pain,
stirring memories there once again;
gentle fingers touch,
feather light and such,
soothing, glowing fires... clensing rain.
=============================

this is EXCELLENT....
very well written...
clever rhyme scheme, a pleasure to read aloud..perfect cadence and harmony..
romantic and lovely
WELCOME TO POETRY LAND  
I look forward to reading more of your work.
jm

wont you sing me your poetry
wont you take me to your home
wont you be for me forever
so Ill never be alone
youre my dream, its a beautiful thing

shadow974
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since 06-21-2001
Posts 649
Michigan


5 posted 08-07-2001 08:04 PM       View Profile for shadow974   Email shadow974   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for shadow974

Beautiful write this is a great first poem and welcome

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.

ShannonM
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since 07-28-2001
Posts 104
Drifitng


6 posted 08-07-2001 08:11 PM       View Profile for ShannonM   Email ShannonM   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ShannonM

I really like this...yes, haunting.

ShannonM
vlraynes
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since 07-25-2000
Posts 9136
Somewhere... out there...


7 posted 08-07-2001 08:14 PM       View Profile for vlraynes   Email vlraynes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit vlraynes's Home Page   View IP for vlraynes


MoonShadow-
   What a wonderful opening post...
   Much enjoyed!
   Welcome to Passions!!  
   You'll enjoy our little 'circle of friends'

   ~vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes


wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)


8 posted 08-07-2001 08:41 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

hhehe (mechanically says) "Welcome to Passions" (to the crowd shouts) i drag all the greats from other sites o yuh!!
Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores


9 posted 08-07-2001 09:11 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

MoonShadow~
Welcome to our circle of Passions friends and poets.
Very nicely done.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

Dulcinea
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since 07-22-2001
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IN


10 posted 08-07-2001 09:15 PM       View Profile for Dulcinea   Email Dulcinea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dulcinea

This was breathtaking...and so familiar...beautifully done!
paladin
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11 posted 08-07-2001 09:57 PM       View Profile for paladin   Email paladin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for paladin

My I add my welcome.I hope you like this site better.

paladin

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


12 posted 08-07-2001 10:13 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Welcome to Passions!  This is a wonderful first poem to bring for sharing with a group who knows good stuff when they see it!

Please check your e-mail for a special greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ



MoonShadow
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since 08-02-2001
Posts 956
Dark side of the Moon.


13 posted 08-08-2001 05:03 AM       View Profile for MoonShadow   Email MoonShadow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MoonShadow

Thank you for your comments and your welcome. The card was lovely, Sunshine. I feel a warmth here that will bring me back often. Again, Thank you.
NoteBook Pages
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14 posted 08-08-2001 10:36 AM       View Profile for NoteBook Pages   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for NoteBook Pages

Being new here as well, I must say, this is beautiful.


NBP  
Constance
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PA


15 posted 08-08-2001 10:44 AM       View Profile for Constance   Email Constance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Constance

Wonderful MoonShadow! I look forward to reading more-- and welcome!
VAS
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since 11-16-2000
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Oregon


16 posted 08-08-2001 05:20 PM       View Profile for VAS   Email VAS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for VAS

Welcome, MoonShadow!

Thoroughly enjoyed the breeze herein.  Well done, fine first post. The wind can be so penetrating and haunting.
RSWells
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17 posted 08-08-2001 09:33 PM       View Profile for RSWells   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSWells

Feeling, sensitive people are never truly alone. Enjoyed.
SmittenKitten
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since 06-20-2001
Posts 1152
where the sky and horizon meet


18 posted 08-08-2001 10:39 PM       View Profile for SmittenKitten   Email SmittenKitten   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit SmittenKitten's Home Page   View IP for SmittenKitten

What a wonderful first post!  I can't think of anything new to add...I agree that the flow and rhyme were creatively applied.
Welcome!!!  Write and share away    we can't wait to read it.
~Krista  

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

Marge Tindal
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19 posted 12-05-2006 02:08 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal


Just -ing ... cause good poets always come 'home' again~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -           noles1@totcon.com   

MoonShadow
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since 08-02-2001
Posts 956
Dark side of the Moon.


20 posted 12-05-2006 03:13 PM       View Profile for MoonShadow   Email MoonShadow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MoonShadow

Thanks Marge for dredging the archives. This was always... and always will be one of my most precious renderings. Hoping others will give it a look, now that you so thoughtfully brought it back to the fore. Thank you again for the welcome... feels nice, warm and huggly.
Enchantress
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since 08-14-2001
Posts 37801
Somewhere in time~


21 posted 12-05-2006 07:10 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

I'm pleased Marge bumped this back up..
I wasn't a member then, I don't believe
and I missed reading it.
Hauntingly beautiful write!!

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

 
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