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MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

0 posted 2001-08-07 07:55 PM

"Wind"

Something in the dark spoke my name,
softly to my ears clearly came;
whispers in the night,
soft as candle light,
doubtless they were there... all the same.

Something in my heart felt the pain,
stirring memories there once again;
gentle fingers touch,
feather light and such,
soothing, glowing fires... clensing rain.

Something in my mind drew me near,
to a calmer time without fear;
hidden in the past,
things that could not last,
haunting, taunting sounds... in my ear.

Something in the wind called to me,
subtle sounding voice though it be;
musical refreain,
each note clearly plain,
penetrates my soul... sets me free.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-08-07 07:57 PM

Welcome!!

this is gorgeous.....I really like this

great first post

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

2 posted 2001-08-07 08:00 PM

Wonderful images and rhyme...welcome to Passions! Great write!

sp

it was love that first drew me,
it is love that will keep me here...
now I see love burning brightly
when everything else is unclear...

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-08-07 08:01 PM

Wonderful flow and rhyme scheme here, Wind. Beautiful work for your first post. Welcome to Passions!! I look forward to reading more.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-08-07 08:02 PM

Something in the dark spoke my name,
softly to my ears clearly came;
whispers in the night,
soft as candle light,
doubtless they were there... all the same.

Something in my heart felt the pain,
stirring memories there once again;
gentle fingers touch,
feather light and such,
soothing, glowing fires... clensing rain.
=============================

this is EXCELLENT....
very well written...
clever rhyme scheme, a pleasure to read aloud..perfect cadence and harmony..
romantic and lovely
WELCOME TO POETRY LAND

I look forward to reading more of your work.
jm

wont you sing me your poetry
wont you take me to your home
wont you be for me forever
so Ill never be alone
youre my dream, its a beautiful thing

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

5 posted 2001-08-07 08:04 PM

Beautiful write this is a great first poem and welcome

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.

ShannonM
Member

since 2001-07-28

Posts 104
Drifitng

6 posted 2001-08-07 08:11 PM

I really like this...yes, haunting.

ShannonM

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

7 posted 2001-08-07 08:14 PM

MoonShadow-
   What a wonderful opening post...
   Much enjoyed!
   Welcome to Passions!!
   You'll enjoy our little 'circle of friends'

   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

8 posted 2001-08-07 08:41 PM

hhehe (mechanically says) "Welcome to Passions" (to the crowd shouts) i drag all the greats from other sites o yuh!!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2001-08-07 09:11 PM

MoonShadow~
Welcome to our circle of Passions friends and poets.
Very nicely done.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

10 posted 2001-08-07 09:15 PM

This was breathtaking...and so familiar...beautifully done!

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

11 posted 2001-08-07 09:57 PM

My I add my welcome.I hope you like this site better.

paladin

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

12 posted 2001-08-07 10:13 PM

Welcome to Passions! This is a wonderful first poem to bring for sharing with a group who knows good stuff when they see it!

Please check your e-mail for a special greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

13 posted 2001-08-08 05:03 AM

Thank you for your comments and your welcome. The card was lovely, Sunshine. I feel a warmth here that will bring me back often. Again, Thank you.

NoteBook Pages
New Member

since 2001-08-07

Posts 8

14 posted 2001-08-08 10:36 AM

Being new here as well, I must say, this is beautiful.

NBP

Constance
Member

since 2001-07-28

Posts 393
Ohio

15 posted 2001-08-08 10:44 AM

Wonderful MoonShadow! I look forward to reading more-- and welcome!

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

16 posted 2001-08-08 05:20 PM

Welcome, MoonShadow!

Thoroughly enjoyed the breeze herein. Well done, fine first post. The wind can be so penetrating and haunting.

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

17 posted 2001-08-08 09:33 PM

Feeling, sensitive people are never truly alone. Enjoyed.

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

18 posted 2001-08-08 10:39 PM

What a wonderful first post! I can't think of anything new to add...I agree that the flow and rhyme were creatively applied.
Welcome!!! Write and share away

we can't wait to read it.
~Krista

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

19 posted 2006-12-05 02:08 PM

Just -ing ... cause good poets always come 'home' again~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

20 posted 2006-12-05 03:13 PM

Thanks Marge for dredging the archives. This was always... and always will be one of my most precious renderings. Hoping others will give it a look, now that you so thoughtfully brought it back to the fore. Thank you again for the welcome... feels nice, warm and huggly.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

21 posted 2006-12-05 07:10 PM

I'm pleased Marge bumped this back up..
I wasn't a member then, I don't believe
and I missed reading it.
Hauntingly beautiful write!!

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

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