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Diary Of An Abandoned Muse |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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~Diary Of An Abandoned Muse~  my poet, she has gone away they say she's coming back today can't wait until that moment when she graces paper with her pen I cannot be without her long I sing the tune...she writes the song together we're the perfect team when we're apart, I muted scream not a word escapes my lips without her pen at fingertips she is my voice cried out in ink my sanity...my missing link voiceless, I impatient wait alone...my thoughts an empty slate so, if you should my poet see please pass along my silent plea heed the call of written word dear poet, let my voice be heard I'll sing the song, you write the tune together we can hang the moon ~vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 08-07-2001).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Vicky.. She's hanging out in the go-beyond with mine...if I see her I'll tell her you are writing darn good without her.  |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
She must be hiding out somewhere with mine! Great poem, Vicky! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Oh I like this!! Very nice work, Vicky. The picture is perfect!! Best of luck in finding that muse of yours!! All writing comes |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Great work, the picture fits well and I don't see where you have even lost a step on your own. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Nicely done, vicky...interesting looking at it from the perspective of our so-called 'lost' muse...I really enjoyed this... sp  it was love that first drew me, |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
VERY CLEVER writing here.... I love the twist here... we always talk of our missing muses...but never think our muse needs us... (not my moody muse)   very cool write Vicky jm wont you sing me your poetry |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
vicky, the title pulled me in and like janet, i dig your ingenuity |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DearestMelancholyMuse~ Your POET is alive and well ... Last spotted sitting in the shade of the magnolia trees out on the Green Swamp~ Had some adorable little pup with her   I'll send her home straightaway ! Vicky that is .... not the pup ! Love ya' ... you brilliant little thing~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Very clever this one was, and perhaps yours took the same vacation plan as mine? I am getting of waiting for a response to my call as well. If she doesn't show up soon I am getting a new one! Great poem and a wonderful twist to it Vicky. ~ To see real beauty you must look with your heart ~ |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Vicky I'll keep a lookin out for you To see if I can find your muse The plea you cry I'll surely give Without our muses we can't live hugs Cindi |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Martie- Thanks so much, my friend. A muse isn't much good without her poet!LOL Hugs to ya. Denise- Well, if you see her, send her my way! Thanks, sweet friend. Lone Wolf- The muse is right here... it's the poet who's missing..LOL Thanks much, my friend...glad you enjoyed. shadow974- I've always liked this picture, so I just had to use it for this poem. Thanks much! snowpants- You got it! Thanks so much!!  Nobody ever seems to think about how the lonely muse must feel..LOL Glad you enjoyed. Janet Marie- Think maybe my muse was trying to tell me something with this one? LOL Just kind of wrote itself! Glad you appreciate the 'twist'. Thanks so much! faterider- And, I dig your reply! Thanks so much, my friend! Marge- Sounds like Vicky's having the time of her life! She has my permissionto stay a little longer...if the pup will have her.LOL Perhaps she could even fly me out there to join her??? Love and hugs, sweet friend  Mysteria- Well, it seems that Marge has found my poet! LOL She's somewhere down in Florida enjoying all that rainy weather! Glad you enjoyed this one, my friend. Hugs to you. Cindi- Well, I do appreciate your concern, but it's not my muse that's missing...'tis I! LOL Have you seen me anywhere?? Love ya hugs to all, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 08-09-2001).] |
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