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0 posted 2001-08-07 02:29 PM



   Happy Birthday…….. catalinamoon

the moon shines brightly today
competing with the sun light
skipping it’s rotation
today it’s only right
heralding the stars
beaming down to earth
for special is the day
our catalinamoon’s birth
for you I have a special wish
that rainbows dance across your face
for all the joy you have given
with your words to us you have graced



"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet)  Shakespeare

© Copyright 2001 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-08-07 04:54 PM


Lady,
    A very sweet tribute to our Catalina...I loved this, and so will she  
           Elise

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2 posted 2001-08-07 06:50 PM


may I join in that wish???

wonderful helen. . . really wonderful. . .  

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3 posted 2001-08-08 12:39 PM


helen,

i liked the way how you started your poem...the desciption about the moon, the sun and the stars is wunnerful

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4 posted 2001-08-08 02:54 AM


A lovely poem and a very happy birthday Catalinamoon!
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5 posted 2001-08-08 11:56 AM


Oh this is so pretty. Thank you so much for doing this for me.
Much love to all
Sandra

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