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A Thousand Kisses |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
A thousand kisses upon your treasured lips A thousand whispers in the dark like this And still I am not satisfied A thousand prayers for a chance to wish These feelings not be denied It’s too late to turn back now, Nor would I, even if I knew how For the sun returns to the sky, And I have given all my heart will allow Yet I do not question why A voice like a flower’s fragrance so sweet, A chance to fall in love again when we meet That’s what I see beyond the door As I stand upon these frozen, aching feet; I’m not tired, but want you more A thousand times a thousand days And I will love you a thousand ways |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Goodness, where are the salts, someone, please, quick, save me from this swoon.... {smiling} Well done, PK.... |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yep......a swooner for sure  wonderful. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Doesn't seem like so much to desire....James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it's the only way PK. . . excellent job my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A thousand kisses upon your treasured lips A thousand whispers in the dark like this(oh damn, mercy)*L* And still I am not satisfied =========================== These feelings not be denied It’s too late to turn back now, Nor would I, even if I knew how For the sun returns to the sky, And I have given all my heart will allow Yet I do not question why =================================== That’s what I see beyond the door As I stand upon these frozen, aching feet; I’m not tired, but want you more A thousand times a thousand days And I will love you a thousand ways ======================================= I think I have read this one "a thousand" times by now *L* definately one of my favs..and one of your best, on a very long list...*S* This is a perfect example of what drew me(us all) to your poetry upon first read... your signature style is on display here... the very cool imagery,(the way you mix the imagery and the emotion) the perfect cadence, the poetic, romantic, intend...the conflict, the longing, passion, and devotion, the depth of the emote,laced with your gift to pen that subtle sensual ache.. so the reader feels every line. Any woman who appreciates/understands poetry waits her whole life to have something like this written for/about her... Beautiful PK... (two words...SUBMIT... PUBLISH)  jm wont you sing me your poetry wont you take me to your home wont you be for me forever so Ill never be alone youre my dream, its a beautiful thing [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 08-08-2001).] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Beautifully done, PK. Sigh . . . All writing comes |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Ahh, yes, I'm with JM...this is indeed fantastic work...beautifully sensual and romantic...I love this... sp  it was love that first drew me, |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
(Sigh) wish my sweet husband was a poet like you, he isn't, but I love him anyway  How well your name suits you. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
I am very humbled with all your kind replies. I thank you all sincerely, and you must know that you motivate me by always reading my work. Thanks. |
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maeve Member
since 2001-08-01
Posts 139In the Outback |
I love the idea of a thousand kisses, PK. And one day I hope to give them to the one I dream of. Beautiful poem. Maeve Take me home to Erin's shores, |
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