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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2001-08-07 01:26 AM



Older, Older
is she gettin’ bolder
or is she gettin’ colder

well if you read
her poetry, my friend,
you’ll know that her heart
is a long way from the end

colder hasn’t happened
in the words of her romance
so come on ever’body
y’all clap your hands

cuz it’s her birthday
and she’s a celebratin’
ice cream and cake
a no more to be waitin’

catalinamoon
all the guys are gonna croon
and with you want to spoon
to a lively birthday tune

but you watch out
and go your merry way
dancin’ and a singin’
just the way ya wanna play!


© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
1 posted 2001-08-07 04:29 AM







Wow.........it's party time......
I have brought the Cake.....& the Music    



And I wish you Sandra........


A very Happy Birthday



You are certainly getting better....nicer and cooler....  

I wish you the best....... Dearest ~Sandra~...........

And
Virginia......You are wonderful......
The poem is really nice and cool......and Sandra deserves it.......

Thank you for that......   ....and we'd wait for her to put off the candles and make her wish.....



Thank you
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[This message has been edited by MyEnchanted_Melody (edited 08-07-2001).]

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
2 posted 2001-08-07 08:17 AM


OH, I am getting misty now, thank you Virginia, how sweet of you, and thanks M.E.M. for your wishes here, and personally too.
You guys are wonderful.
Sandra

RSWells
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since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533

3 posted 2001-08-07 08:53 AM


Best wishes on this your day. Nice gesture VAS.

"Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve"

Sven
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4 posted 2001-08-07 06:54 PM


play it again VAS!!  

and thanks to Enchanted Melody for the music!!

wonderful. . . simply excellent. . .

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kaile
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5 posted 2001-08-08 12:34 PM


colder hasn't happened
in the words of her romance

liked those lines

happy birthday, sandra

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