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Open Poetry #15

My Last Breath

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-08-06 11:17 PM

My Last Breath

I
will
love you
to
death
love you
till
my last
breath
in my
silence
in my
shout
true thing
my hearts
about
yes
I shall
love you
till
breath no
more
you
I do
I do
adore

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-08-06 11:28 PM

this is the way it should be!

" I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis"

Kay

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

2 posted 2001-08-06 11:39 PM

Very cool poem! I love the title!

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

3 posted 2001-08-07 07:07 AM

Simply beautiful devotion. Thank you.
Sincerely,
Regina

g-hm
Member

since 2001-05-16

Posts 85

4 posted 2001-08-07 08:24 AM

so sweet.

illusion
Member

since 2001-06-19

Posts 296

5 posted 2001-08-07 09:13 AM

The recipient of such love is very lucky.

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