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wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2001-08-13 01:10 AM



There are dreams
we cannot say
or they might
just melt away
if I say your name
just so
and you do the same
you know
we will disappear
and never come back
to see
that this was where
we had to be
found in dreams
we cannot say
or they might
just melt away

© Copyright 2001 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-08-13 01:40 AM


Walt~
Yes .... sometimes we just savor them in the keep of silence~

Very nicely said, my friend.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Kaos
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since 2001-08-02
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between space and time
2 posted 2001-08-13 02:41 AM


I have to agree...sometimes moments should just be savored and not forced any farther...silence is sweet when words are lost...cool piece

" How can i feel if i can't breathe...?"
- Godsmack

MoonShadow
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since 2001-08-02
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Dark side of the Moon.
3 posted 2001-08-13 05:04 AM


Some moments are as fragile as dreams.. as fleeting as wishes.. desired forever. Sometimes a morsal is all we will get.. never the feast.. and be grateful for the taste. But the wonderful thing of a memory kept in the heart.. it can be savored for a lifetime.
vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
4 posted 2001-08-14 06:30 PM



Walt-
   So true, my friend.
   Wonderfully expressed.

   hugs,
   ~vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Denise
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5 posted 2001-08-14 09:25 PM


Nicely done, Walt!
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