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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2001-08-06 10:53 PM


I Can Hear The Angels Sing
By: Noah Eaton
8/5/01

I can hear the angels sing, deep in your embrace
Moaning hymns through every heartbeat I’ve bade
Since the day I pledged my heart to you, my angel
Sauntering in the garden of your heart, among these blossoming willows

Slow down my beating heart, O’ sweet Aphrodite
Crown your shimmering head and scatter the stars as we dream
Light the room as I make love to her
Under velvet skies of passion spangled with yellow embers

Touch me, sweet darling, may Destiny be our supreme consort
Hand in hand may we stand, singing songs only lovers hearts can forte
I will gladly welcome you into my arms and recite this hymeneal
Inspired by the angel in you, which has helped me harken love’s call

Far down in your heaven is where I’ll embower
Resting beside you in this bed of flowers
Beneath where the cupid hath fired his golden arrow
Whimsically attracting us together as two spirits, drinking from one hearts marrow

I can hear the angels sing
The day I fell in love with you
And every time our lips will kiss
I can still feel the heavens responding…with you


© Copyright 2001 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
Saunni
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1 posted 2001-08-06 11:34 PM


Oh, very beautiful! This is awesome.  

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2 posted 2001-08-06 11:46 PM


wonderfully written, very passionate, I enjoyed evey line, excellent work!

                                -XERXES

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3 posted 2001-08-07 01:59 AM


I liked your poem very much.
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4 posted 2001-08-07 02:16 AM


That was simply lovely!

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