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Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-08-06 10:45 PM

Safe Catch

ordinary glance
his heart skipped a beat then slipped
safe into her hands

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2001-08-07 02:03 AM

I'm new here but i think I understand this. It's like mixing love and football to me.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2001-08-07 02:15 AM

lol...and a good catch it was~nice Sunshine!

~ To see real beauty you must look with your heart ~
~* Mysteria *~

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-08-07 02:17 PM

Say hey kid

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

4 posted 2001-08-07 02:27 PM

I love minimalist poetry.Here is one you might like.

                Glance

               No words said.
               Standing apart.Still,
               They speak love.

paladin

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-08-07 03:01 PM

I hope his heart is safe there, this is a lovely thought.

" I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis"

Kay

howpeculiar
Member

since 2000-12-12

Posts 56

6 posted 2001-08-07 05:24 PM

~grins~ I got a very cute, very LITERAL image from this lol (think hands cupped for water and a slippery valentine-heart shaped heart). I like ~warm smile~.

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

7 posted 2001-08-07 07:08 PM

Sounds great, as long as she doesn't drop it...very gentle smile, well done, Sissie

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

8 posted 2001-08-07 07:59 PM

This is soooooo sweet, Karilea! I love it!

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

9 posted 2001-08-07 08:02 PM

That's where his heart belongs

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

10 posted 2001-08-07 08:03 PM

Sunshine-
   I love this...what a lovely thought.

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

11 posted 2001-08-08 08:43 AM

Sunshine!
Lovely work! I can see the fast falling love here! Beautifully done!
Hugs
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

12 posted 2001-08-08 08:54 AM

Sunshine,
Well done, enjoyed.

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

13 posted 2001-08-08 10:19 AM

Safety lies within
Hearts entwined freely to each
Eternal comfort

Constance
Member

since 2001-07-28

Posts 393
Ohio

14 posted 2001-08-08 10:38 AM

Sunshine- I can hear the crowd--they're on their feet! Good hands! yaaaay!
I liked this much.

mirror man
Senior Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

15 posted 2001-08-08 12:51 PM

Many interpretations to this one: football, baseball, fishing. I prefer football myself. You go out for the long pass and catch safe as the gridiron battles at the scrimmage (they thought it was a rush). Here's one Hail Mary to you.

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